Powerful paragraph writing

Powerful paragraph writing is a simple paragraph but you need more describing words,metaphor's,simile's,punctuation,personification. You get a pitcher of something and start writing about the pitcher we do powerful paragraph writing in the morning before we do our contract.

What is a simile and a metaphor: A simile is comparison of one thing with anther kind of thing.Here's an example.The grass is as green as mint leaves on the damp tree's.A metaphor is some think that says one thing is the same as something else.Here's an example.The bark is like tasty chocolate muffin's.

What is personification:personification is a act of giving human traits,qualities, or actions to objects,concepts, or animals.
Here's  my paragraph writing...
One day i was in the peaceful forest waking  down  the path on the grass,the grass is as green as the mint leaves on the damp tree's. The bark is brown like tasty chocolate muffin's and i saw white fog all I could here is birds chirping. 

                                                                                                                                                                   

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

This week in kakapo class we did art work because it is samosa language week and you need A3 paper and scissors.fold the paper into a triangle  and then cut the rectangle that is on the edge and then unfold the triangle then it wound be a square then you fold the square in half and then in half again so then if can be a little square then fold in half again and then it wound be a even littler square then you make a flower shape and  design it.

CONFESSION POEM

Last week in kakapo class we wrote a poem that Williams Carlos Williams wrote but we took out  same of his words out and put own on words in. The poem is about confession and confession is admitting something so the class admitted something they did and I admitted taking lollies from my brother. I learnt how to rite a good poem and I learnt the understanding of confession.I enjoyed writing the poem because it had a lot of amazing words that I could put in.It was a fun activity I enjoyed it. And the challenging thing was that I had to make sure it makes sense and I had to change a few thing so it made sense and the most of all challenge was to get things in the right place.

This is my poem at the  bottom.

This is just to say

by:Williams Carlos Williams and Leticey.

this is just to say

I have taken your lollies 

that you were probably 

going to eat forgive me they were 

tempting me sweet and gooey.

This week we did a study about a Christmas movie and first we watch it and the name of movie is  Klaus. We got given a contract that had 12 different things for as to do on the contract. My favourite thing to do on the contract is 5 things to fill up there bucket of kind things about them and we wrote the 5 things in our contract book. And I enjoyed it because I have never done this contact activities before.

Roll-A-Picasso

We have been learning about Picasso and we created some art that is called Roll-A Picasso.

Interesting facts.

Picasso began doing art in 1897. He was the age of seven when he started his first art and finished it at
the age of nine. Picasso entered Barcelona's school of Fine art's, where his father taught, at age 13.Picasso full name has 23 words.His long name comes from a list of saints and relatives.

my holidays.

Mrs Cutler told us to think about the things we done on the school holidays one Amazing/one scary and one relaxing and ask us to do a blog post about our school holidays.

  

Amazing:i went to Dargaville to see my family and when I seen them i was excited because I haven't seen them in a wiel.

Scary:I drop my phone on the concrete

Relaxing:I got to sleep in and i got to relax it was fun.

Narrative.

my pet robot usually listened to my commands. But today he seemed like he had a mind of its own...My pet robot is 10 years old I bought him on 2009 7th of August. And i have had him for 10 years he is blue,black,white and one day.I thought it was because i got a new pet cat from the pet shop down town for my robot to play with. But the robot got jealous of the cat because the robot was my pet first because i thought that it was gona\ be a surprise for the robot but the robot just keep being mean to the cat so one day. I had to give the cat away to a person name Rehua she had no pets at all. And the next day the robot Finley listen to my commands so i said i tried to surprise you but it did'n't work out so the robot said i did'n't know i thought you did'n't wot me. so we went out for the day and talked about it and then it was happely ever after.