CONFESSION POEM

Last week in kakapo class we wrote a poem that Williams Carlos Williams wrote but we took out  same of his words out and put own on words in. The poem is about confession and confession is admitting something so the class admitted something they did and I admitted taking lollies from my brother. I learnt how to rite a good poem and I learnt the understanding of confession.I enjoyed writing the poem because it had a lot of amazing words that I could put in.It was a fun activity I enjoyed it. And the challenging thing was that I had to make sure it makes sense and I had to change a few thing so it made sense and the most of all challenge was to get things in the right place.

This is my poem at the  bottom.

This is just to say

by:Williams Carlos Williams and Leticey.

this is just to say

I have taken your lollies 

that you were probably 

going to eat forgive me they were 

tempting me sweet and gooey.